new cat/ sneak paw of thunder clan

[swiftpaw1]

Subject Title:: new cat/ Razorstar Loner

Character Name:: Razorstar

Age:: 15 moons

Gender:: Tom

Physical Appearance:: Razorstar is camoflauge colored. He is an all black cat and, blends into the dirt very well. His tail is pithch bla ck and so are is paws. has brown eyes, and small ears. the rest of sneakpaws body is pitch black. also has small whiskers. He lso has a scar on his lower left leg because he was attaked by A rouge. On his left side he has a small gray stripe on him, about 2 inches. Some belive he can hypnotize with his eyes. not really true though.

Personality Description:: Razorstar gets upset easily. He never gives up and keeps on trying. he also is confident because he can easliy sneak up on other cats. Very young and playful and an excellent tracker like his littermate. ( fire paw)

History:: Same history as firepaw. had parents runaway at birth because they decided on not having kits of their own. This mae Razorstars life miserable. He was found by a warrior but fought it off.
very dissapointed he was caught in TC terriotory.He also chose a different path form firepaw, didn't want to join thunderclan

Likes/Dislikes(optional):: doesnt like fish

Other:: He is A LONER, LONER, LONER!

Codeword:: 8811

location: ( part of other) Razor

[{darkles}]

Hey there Swiftie! (don't mind if I steal Ebon's nickname for you, do you?)

Before I can accept this profile you'll need to put in the right codeword - there's no point making one up in the vain hope it might be right. There aren't even any numbers in the codeword, that's why it's called a codeWORD. =)

Once you've done that I'll take another look, but I'd advise you to try and put a little more detail into your descriptions, particularly his appearance. There's more you can talk about if you really think about it.

And whiskers has an S on the end, not a Z.

[swiftpaw1]

codeword: doughnut

[swiftpaw1]

;D
i did the z on perphas

[flarestorm]

Still need more detail before anyone can accept him Swiftie.

[{darkles}]

The codeword is also not doughnut. =/

If you had read the rules you would know what it was. I suggest you go ahead and read them now. You'll find them in the Help Section.

Had you read the rules you'd also know that you can make more than one character, which would have meant you didn't have to ask that question in the Members Chat Section. It is quite important to read the rules of a site, we don't just put them there for people to laugh at. They're there for a reason. When you go to create a character it explains clearly that there is a codeword hidden in the rules - so you cannot say that you didn't know where it was.

I apologise for ranting but it annoys me that you don't even try.

[Fortress]

The profile must consist of a minimum of 5 good length and detailed sentences in order to be accepted. The codeword is also in the rules and the question you asked is also in the rules as Dark said. If you need help with your profile just ask me or take a look at Ivykit's profile as she sets a good example.