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Post by sekki on May 12, 2010 2:34:12 GMT
Subject Title:: new Cat Character Name:: sekki Age:: 2 Gender:: She-cat Physical Appearance:: The eyes have a "boomerang" shape, with a hooded brow to protect her from harsh sunlight. black "tear-streak" markings run from the corner of the eyes down the sides of the nose to the whiskers, much like that of a cheetah.Green eyes with gold flecks. tall and slim build gives the appearance of greater size than her actual weight. brown spotted gold tabby with black spots only differentiation from any other savannah cat are the white ''socks'' on all four paws. Personality Description:: Has a short temper that she is getting better at controlling, fun and wild, adventurous, loyal and loves to razzle with friends wont ever back down from a fight but wont typically incite one either History:: escaped from a serval/domestic cat breeding lab. father is an african serval -captured mother is a bengal- bred in captivity she got the chance to escape the breeding lab on a whim with her parents when she was a kit, on the journey they were killed by a husky and an alaskan malamute. but she holds no resentment she is just glad she made it. Likes/Dislikes(optional):: likes playing with food, playing with friends, sleeping, and climbing trees. dislikes large proportions of water! thunder, and being teased by older siblings. Other:: NoneCodeword:: apple
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Post by Fortress on May 12, 2010 10:36:08 GMT
Hello Sekki and welcome to The Wild Cats. I'm afraid your biography is not detailed enough for us to accept. Your physical appearance, personality and history must be at least 5 good length well detailed sentences. Also please put a capital letter after each full stop. I am assuming you are a rogue? But a two moon old kit cannot do what you said in your history, do you mean two years? If so please change your age to moons.
Thank you and if you need any help don't be afraid to contact me or any other staff and we we'll do all we can to assist you,
Fortress x
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Post by {darkles} on May 12, 2010 20:58:28 GMT
Sekki! You're Nightstalker's aquaintance, am I right? =D
Pleased to meet you! I'm Darkwhisker, but just call me Dark. I'm the second resident crazy person, I'm afraid Night pushed me out of the top spot!
As Fortress has mentioned there are a couple of little details that may need to be fixed before we can accept Sekki (the character). Not all of your descriptions need editing. Your physical appearance description is perfect, but I would agree that the personality and history may need to be lengthened just a tad.
If you could also specify which category you would like her to go into, i.e. Clan cat/loner/kittypet/rogue etc. I'm sure that by 2 you meant 2 years, so just put 24 moons and don't worry about it. =) Mistakes happen.
Other than that - welcome to The Wild Cats! I hope to see you around the boards once Sekki's been accepted! =D She's more than welcome to come and have a chat with my kittypet Jester if ever she's feeling lonely.
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